Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?given your opinion.
In this contemporary epoch, it has become a debatable whether childcare training courses should be compulsory for all guardians or not. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement. I believe the role of childcare training courses is terrific to lay a strong foundation of society by training people to be the best parents for their children.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to support my point of view. First and foremost, childcare training programs are framed by experts who inculcate best rearing practices to make parents aware about the preliminary science behind the well-being of juveniles. To make it clear, these training courses teach psychological techniques to parents so that they can prevent their offsprings from unhealthy practices. Moreover, these training courses also aware the parents about child psychology and how marital issues can put adverse effect on the development of childrens. Hence, after having the knowledge about adverse effect of marital issues, parents try to overcome their conflicts which ensure the better upbringing of their pupil.
Probing ahad, in present time, women are shouldering economical responsibilities of man by doing jobs. Therefore, these programs teach the fathers numerous skills such as cooking skill and how to serve to children in the absence of mother. Needless to say, such child care training courses act as a boon for both parents for better rearing of their offsprings. Apart from it, these courses also inculcate some skills like playing at least one game with children and spending time with them which helps the parents to make harmonious bondings with their toddlers.
To recapitulate, undeniably, childcare training courses are long term and parents may feel stressed while attending these courses. But according to my perception, these courses should be mandatory to parents as these courses act as a helping hand for parents in the better upbringing of their children.
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33225806452 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75112123581 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6063304642 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335663171631 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120704098177 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083268526394 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231488986807 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107669461898 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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