The chart shows the employment status of adults in the US in to the 2003 and 2013.
The following the vertical graph depicts the percentage of American adults in different employment fields in the US between 2003 and 2013.
The most striking feature to be observed is that the volume of adults working in education training, the hotel industry, the building industry and self employed sector followed an increasing trend while the medical sector and building business sector followed decreasing trend over the given period.
At the fleeting glance it is immensely clear that in 2003, the volume of adults working in business sector was highest with more than 45 % followed by medical sector, self employed sector and building industry with approximately 20, 10 8% respectively. The unemployed rate was more than 10% education sector and hotel industry was accounted for around 10 and 5% orderly.
Turning to rest of the description, in 2013 the percentage of self employed people was around 30. The volume of American adults working in business sector, building industry and hotel industry was around 25, 20 and 18% respectively. In 2013, the volume of American adults employed in education sector was two times more than 2013. Besides this the unemployment rate decreased 5% in 2013 than 2003.
- Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out while others say that we should concentrate more on problems human beings Discuss both sides and give 84
- Some people think that government should invest in arts and cultural events others think that government should invest money on more important things 67
- A recent study showed that both developing and developed countries prosper because of the economic growth people from developing countries are happier than before while others people from developed countries are not as happy as they were very past why thi 67
- The chart shows the employment status of adults in the US in to the 2003 and 2013 67
- Percentage of students proficient in a foreign language
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... striking feature to be observed is that the volume of adults working in educatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25128205128 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6885770364 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482051282051 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.7030597499 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202716640589 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126373027933 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970544932875 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166245524533 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108757294655 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.