Children play significant role in the growth of a nation but nowadays obesity in toddlers is the major concern. Eating habits have been changed with the passage of time and making the people and youth obese. However, there are other so many causes and those would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with its effects and solutions.
To begin with cause of obesity, toddlers are very much fond of fast food which includes lots of fat and oil so they do not prefer homemade food. They eat outside food but do not do exercise to digest it properly hence it makes them overweight. In addition, kids do not take proper balanced diet and follow diet chart. Therefore, it becomes the cause of unmaintained weight which leads to health problem such as easy fatigue, laziness. To solve this problem, parents should tell importance of homemade food and following proper diet chart to children.
Furthermore, infants are so attracted towards electronic gadgets, mobile phones, laptop, computers and spend lot of time on these gizmos. Consequently, spending long hours in front of gizmos reduces the physical activities then this lead to weight gaining. Another cause is that children have very hectic schedules of study this makes them tired therefore they do not focus on health and become fat. The solution of this trouble is that whatever amount of time a kids get from studies, can be spent by performing outdoors activities so parents should encourage regarding outdoor games.
In a conclusion, children related issue cannot be neglected and parents can make understand the importance of good health and maintained weight to children . Good eating habits lead to healthy body
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09420289855 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54824040744 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8767509253 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145746310144 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462714363999 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431372505955 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817767135247 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254420698358 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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