children and teenagers are committing more and more crimes in many countries. why is this happening. How can be stop this or least reduce this crime.
It is well said that 'today 's children are the future of tomorrow. Presently, the ratio of crime by juveniles and adults are increasing like a wild fire. Here, I would like to account it's reasons along with it's solutions.
Manifold reasons are there behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, unemployment, inflation, are the main factor of this issue. To illustrate, number of young educated people more than the number of vaccancy and inflation is increasing day by day. Therefore, lack of jobs unemployed teenagers do crimes such as rovery, kidnapping, and many others in order to get money for two square meal. Apart from it, hectic schedule of parents also responsible .for example, both parent involved in work for bread and butter and they have not sufficient time for their juveniles. They are unable to provide them moral and social values and children watch crime programs on television in the absence of parents. As a result, lack of social and moral values stimulate children for crime.
Numerous remedial measure are there to solve this worrying concern.Initially, administration try to reduce the inflation and confer employment to litterate young people so that they stay away from crime.Further, parents must nourish their children with Supreme traits. People must be awared by the drawbacks of overpopulation which enhance the number of problems in society.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, crime rate is the big issue. However, still believe that government and people should take join responsibility to nip this evil in the bud.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24899598394 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90460580654 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642570281124 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.0775701823 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233082101851 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721678683008 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430791321062 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121514179129 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443896934994 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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