Various countries have an alarming rise in the crimes committed by delinquent teenagers.The reasons for this are numerous and various measures can be taken to reduce it.
Firstly, the basic problem lies on the upbringing of these children.Most of them are victims of domestic violence, either from parents or relatives, and they then further vent their frustration on society by committing violence and other crimes like theft ,drug dealing.Some parents are very lenient on their children, the lack of discipline of these children will lead to a delusion of grandeur that they can get away with anything without being caught or punished.Secondly, the type of friends a child hangs around with, do affect their perspective and personality.If these friends are drug abusers or thieves , it becomes only a matter of time when they dive into much darker levels of society and have contacts with various miscreants.For instance, reports shows that in major cities most drug abusers caught by authorities were teenagers mostly from distraught families and had contact with thugs and mob leaders.
Eventhough, the rise in crimes makes it easy for the youth to go astray and indulge in nefarious activities, certain steps can be taken by the Government and parents to placate this situation.To start with, parents can play a pivotal role in forbiding the youth into committing crime.They should be responsible in creating a more amicable environment with their children, by involving them in various fun activities and by being a citadel of hope for them during difficult times.Finally, the government should take punitive measures to punish the young miscreants by sentencing them to juvenile prisons and a long term community service after their sentence.
In conclusion,eventhough there is a increase in crimes committed by the youth in various countries due to familial or social sitches, certain actions by parents and the government can help curb the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29317269076 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97832167504 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622489959839 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 20.2975951904 409% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 299.693176432 49.4020404114 607% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 439.333333333 106.682146367 412% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.0 20.7667163134 400% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 7.06120827912 397% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209059970033 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165337495514 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722378417269 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165337495514 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722378417269 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.0 13.0946893788 344% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.77 50.2224549098 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 11.3001002004 316% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.51 8.58950901804 146% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 10.1190380762 348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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