There is never a bad time of learning a foreign language, no matter how old are you. Being a bilingual brings alot of benefits in your life or career. However it is more beneficiary when you learn a foreign language in your early years of studies. According to my opinion, learning an additional language only brings advantages is your life, it does not have any disadvantage. Following are the which describes the benefits of learning new language in your early stage of life.
1. When you are in school, your brain is still developing. It is much easier to learn and pick-up new words or new language at that time.
2. Learning a new language can help children to keep them mentally sharp for longer period.
3. Being bilingual can also help in cognitive developments. Children could improve academically also.
4. Learning more than one language could also help you in your future career. By the passing years, our society and culture are developing.When you enter in your professional life you can meet people of different countries. To survive in your professional life you should be proficient in more than one language. There after you could have better chance of growth in your company.
5. Bilinguals are always better than monolinguals. When you mention your known languages on your CV,your chances of getting hires will be increased automatically.
6. According to the studies, it is also mentioned that students who have learn a foreign language has better problem solving ability.
Other than above described benefits, bilinguals have many significant advantages. They have clear vision in all aspects, have more respect for other culture and religion.
From my opinion, it is reasonable to say that learning a foreign language at the early stage of studies has only advantages with zero disadvantage.
- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison What do you think are the causes for this What possible solutions can you suggest 56
- Some parents think that helping their children with homework is good Others think children should do their homework on their own Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people 039 s lives Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilitiesDiscuss both these views and give your opinion 56
- Some people say that it is impossible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...lot of benefits in your life or career. However it is more beneficiary when you learn a...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ts. Children could improve academically also. 4. Learning more than one language co...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
... our society and culture are developing.When you enter in your professional life you...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... our society and culture are developing.When you enter in your professional life you...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Thereafter
...e proficient in more than one language. There after you could have better chance of growth ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , your
... mention your known languages on your CV,your chances of getting hires will be increa...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...s also mentioned that students who have learn a foreign language has better problem s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81829538709 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1338265078 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.65 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343172640246 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114636222709 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654690517036 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148602062307 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751509465382 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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