In today's rapidly changing globalized world saving our precious environment and creating a eco friendly atmosphere for the world has become one of the pressing issue, requires immediate action. From past few decades due to industrialization of the world our environment is facing myriad of negative effects. In this discussion we will talk about how ecotourism could become a huge step to encourage and conserve the cultural landmarks.
The main advantage of ecotourism is that society from that region are getting employment and stability. Therefore, they do not have to move out for earning. Moreover, it could also help to sustain the cultural values of each region. People regional wise are become more responsible and attentive towards the environment safety. Numerous of people from same region are there who have great and deep knowledge of history of the cultural landmarks. Old people from different area there who can sustain old cultural and traditional activities.
In order to increase the awareness of ecotourism numerous of country's government has started taking initiatives. Nevertheless, in comparison to earlier now people are more interested in keeping clean the environment. In many schools and college it is additional and compulsory subject to study about environment safety. Moreover, juveniles and young generations are getting involve it this field.
According to my opinion, to avoid the detrimental effects, we are already seeing the changes in our young generation towards the environment safety. In order to make it more sustainable solution government ought to pass some strict laws. However, to save the world and promote the ecotourism, it is responsibility of each individual and society to obey these laws and rules before the situation become more intractable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52653061224 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04437266356 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0807412893 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210016689389 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630060301705 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563601102714 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11660469437 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122131611657 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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