Education plays an important role in our life. Some children can learn efficiently by watching TV and they should be motivated to watch TV both at home and at school. I disagree with the given statement. A number of arguments surrounded my opinion.
There are certain reasons why TV can be beneficial. Firstly, television is a source of entertainment. Television has two features like audio and visual which can be easily understand by children. They can improve the skills and know the culture and tradition with the help of technology.
There are many reasons why TV can not be beneficial for children. To begin with, education is very important in children's life. If children are seeing TV everytime and they can not be concentrate on their study. Also, they are not doing other sports like cricket, volleyball and hockey etc. Moreover, the education programs like National Geographic can not replace books andacademic lectures because they tend to entertain the people and do not give deep knowledge.
Furthermore, if children watch TV in school and also their interaction with the teacher would be limited. Teachers teach a lot of things at school. If Children studies by watching TV then they do not improve the spelling mistakes.
In conclusion, TV is very good for education purpose and used it in limits. Parents and teachers should taking care of their children when they are doing study
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s andacademic lectures because they tend to entertain the people and do not give ...
^^
Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...achers teach a lot of things at school. If Children studies by watching TV then th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05150214592 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77166172439 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570815450644 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9886344064 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3888888889 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9444444444 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32643447563 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103473290374 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833902424905 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19186756686 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847079907982 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s andacademic lectures because they tend to entertain the people and do not give ...
^^
Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...achers teach a lot of things at school. If Children studies by watching TV then th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05150214592 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77166172439 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570815450644 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9886344064 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3888888889 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9444444444 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32643447563 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103473290374 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833902424905 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19186756686 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847079907982 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.