Children over 15 should be allow to make decisions about their lives without the interference of their parents or teachers. Society should accept that children mature at a younger age these days and should adjust the low accordingly.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that parents or teachers must give opportunity to their children (age over 15) to make decisions about their lives. Moreover, society should understand that children today is more mature than in the past, so the law must be suited to the situation today.
To begin with, there are many reasons for children if they can determine their decisions freely without any interference from others. Firstly, it is the human right to choose the way of their life. Because of technology influence, indeed, it accelerates the children to be more mature. As a sequence, it is does not matter...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
... that situation, sometimes, parent give advise about what major should children take f...
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Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a should be for the partner life. It is a optional that means not to limit childr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8602484472 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70965002037 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506211180124 0.561755894193 90% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7713803133 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354909770538 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12733106862 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631626672246 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246960438483 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517441667168 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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