Choosing a college major is always a controversial issue for both students and parents. Some think that studying ATC is an unwise decision. I completely disagree with this opinion because of the benefits of studying ATC such as a professional English environment and financial knowledge. Therefore, this essay will give an insight into this critical issue.
What benefits has ATC provided to students? Firstly, ATC faculty is one of the prestigious English training places. According to a recent survey, teachers at ATC studied abroad and have doctorates and masters, so they are exposed to a professional English environment and have strong teaching skills. Secondly, ATC equips students with professional and expertise financial knowledge. The evidence is the framework of the training program with subjects on banking and finance taught by lecturers who have worked in the banking sector. For example, ATC students learn about Corporate Finance, Banking and Accounting and International Payments. These reasons mentioned are some of the main factors leading to positive effects such as English proficiency and banking skills of ATC students. =119w
First, due to being studied in a professional English environment, ATC students can comfortably and confidently communicate and work with any international partners and friends with this language. Furthermore, by studying specialized subjects in finance and banking in English, majors have the opportunity to practice the language they are studying, to master in-depth knowledge, and to open themselves up. one more career door in this very field. In the current era of strong economic integration, working in a bank means that YOU often have the ability to interact with foreigners, and it comes with contracts, signings... of course YOU must use foreign languages, of which English is the predominant language. Besides, the ATC degree from the banking academy which is a top-ranking university is also a competitive advantage for students. According to a recent survey, ATC graduates can pursue both finance and teaching. As a result, ATC students are dynamic and adaptable to many working environments. =156w
Some students and parents believe that ATC graduates will find it difficult to get a high position in the banking industry because their professional knowledge is not as good as that of students majoring in finance sufficient. Therefore ATC students can only work as tellers or credit officers. However, students studying banking and finance can work in many different fields such as: banking, corporate finance, insurance finance, tax finance, and they are fully qualified to take on various positions. chief financial officer, chief executive officer, general manager. =87w
On the whole, a professional environment in both English and finance are advantages that make choosing ATC a wise decision. Therefore I recommend that students who choose ATC should be satisfied with their decision and strive to gain practical knowledge.
Choosing a college major is always a controversial issue for both students and parents. Some think that studying ATC is an unwise decision. I completely disagree with this opinion because of the benefits of studying ATC such as a professional English environment and financial knowledge. Therefore, this essay will give an insight into this critical issue.
What benefits has ATC provided to students? Firstly, ATC faculty is one of the prestigious English training places. According to a recent survey, teachers at ATC studied abroad and have doctorates and masters, so they are exposed to a professional English environment and have strong teaching skills. Secondly, ATC equips students with professional and expertise financial knowledge. The evidence is the framework of the training program with subjects on banking and finance taught by lecturers who have worked in the banking sector. For example, ATC students learn about Corporate Finance, Banking and Accounting and International Payments. These reasons mentioned are some of the main factors leading to positive effects such as English proficiency and banking skills of ATC students. =119w
First, due to being studied in a professional English environment, ATC students can comfortably and confidently communicate and work with any international partners and friends with this language. Furthermore, by studying specialized subjects in finance and banking in English, majors have the opportunity to practice the language they are studying, to master in-depth knowledge, and to open themselves up. one more career door in this very field. In the current era of strong economic integration, working in a bank means that YOU often have the ability to interact with foreigners, and it comes with contracts, signings... of course YOU must use foreign languages, of which English is the predominant language. Besides, the ATC degree from the banking academy which is a top-ranking university is also a competitive advantage for students. According to a recent survey, ATC graduates can pursue both finance and teaching. As a result, ATC students are dynamic and adaptable to many working environments. =156w
Some students and parents believe that ATC graduates will find it difficult to get a high position in the banking industry because their professional knowledge is not as good as that of students majoring in finance sufficient. Therefore ATC students can only work as tellers or credit officers. However, students studying banking and finance can work in many different fields such as: banking, corporate finance, insurance finance, tax finance, and they are fully qualified to take on various positions. chief financial officer, chief executive officer, general manager. =87w
On the whole, a professional environment in both English and finance are advantages that make choosing ATC a wise decision. Therefore I recommend that students who choose ATC should be satisfied with their decision and strive to gain practical knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in fact, of course, such as, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2550.0 1615.20841683 158% => OK
No of words: 461.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53145336226 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96809623952 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509761388286 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 781.2 506.74238477 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7485118748 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.44 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484309991012 0.244688304435 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138769800366 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112751339562 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310834935598 0.151304729494 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186577557771 0.056905535591 328% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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