High level of traffic is seen to be a drawback in the present busy society which created impacts on residents. In this essay, the reasons to the issue will be addressed and steps taken to deal with will be presented.
In the presence of a growing population in nowadays world, an increased transportation is in demand to enable one from getting one place to another destination. Taxis, buses, private cars, are seen to be the most common in road traffic. Students to school, adults to offices is a natural phenomenon that caused the rising use of traffic. Another reason is that people nowadays are getting used to a fast pace in life to look for an efficient means to reach their destination as fast as possible. As a result, clogged roads and even cars will be lined up.
However, steps should be taken to alleviate the situation. One method would be to encourage to use more bikes to replace public transport facilities. Bikes are smaller in size, whilst, can save more places in public areas where environment is improved, at the same time, the density of traffic can then be lessened. Another way could be to regulate family planning to prevent the public on further reproduction. Decreasing the population due to the fact that overpopulation and limited urban areas is a lucid circumstance that should not be neglected. Measures should be taken to ameliorate the increased traffic caused by people.
In conclusion, there are some ways to alleviate the traffic problem. As traffic is becoming tense, measures will be taken to halt the continuous growing of vehicles on roads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...In the presence of a growing population in nowadays world, an increased transportation is i...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...ation. One method would be to encourage to use more bikes to replace public transport ...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: smaller
... public transport facilities. Bikes are smaller in size, whilst, can save more places in public...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91821561338 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74923588988 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8964181543 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208620707019 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713155696369 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457429263867 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130256434912 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368277080399 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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