In recent decades global warming became one of the most dangerous effects for humanity. Despite this threat, our society is not giving any effort to preserve it. I completely agree with this statement due to the amount of air pollution, toxic emissions are rising while the government did not emphasize this.
To begin with, constructing new manufactures which soaring toxic emission, also which vehicles causing air pollution their engines emit CO2 into the atmosphere leads to unpleasant condition for living in the earth. A plethora of organizations which related to green peace, trying to prevent detrimental consequences, nevertheless some countries do not make a contribution to deal with this pressing issue. To illustrate, in Central Asia certain countries started construct special atom station regardless it is harmless. Therefore, society should maximalize invocation to tackle this problem.
Secondly, deforestation remains the most threat to the environment. Every day approximately 100 thousand hectares are cutting in the Earth and it is width is boosing. Individuals such as celebrities or several politic members attempt to counter them and trying to enhance broadens public horizons by speeches. Literally, a lack of concern a huge crowd the main problem. For instance, it is well known nuclear weapon countries not taking seriously these issues meanwhile the environment deteriorating they fighting among themselves.
To conclude, if we do not perceive it, there will be inevitable consequences, which mold the future.
- Some people say that money can make life easier and more comfortable. But others say that having a great amount of wealth can bring some problems. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of a having a lot of money? 56
- The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, Californiaand the rest of the world. 73
- Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions. 56
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing. 84
- The chart below, shows the amount of money per spent on fast foods in britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61373390558 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05489570633 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.733905579399 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7291421033 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0671255175533 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219481305246 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269230903039 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0400496105343 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023559636629 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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