There is no doubt that the last 2 decades globalization had a great influence on the whole world economy via it benefits nevertheless we should not forget adverse consequences which molded. While I completely claim that it contributed to positive effects as well as to negative effects which will be considered.
To begin with, globalization plays a crucial role in the economy of all country via it is detrimental effects and it should be remembered. Nowadays gold concede to oil and gas and many countries enhanced their economy through these raw materials which occasionally also lead to unpleasant economy rate. Emulation of oil countries has a huge effect on undeveloped countries which only require stabilization of oil. For instance, a crisis which mold in 2008 due to a competition of oil countries such as Saudi Arabia and the USA drastically altered whole economy shares and numerous business executives ceased their work. Therefore, globalization has drawbacks regardless of evolving.
On the one hand, it promotes to evolve for many countries including Qatar or Kazakhstan via founding gas and oil. Before founding oil, Qatar was one of the most poorless places in the world than after it became wealthier their neighbors. It also impacts the economy of developing the country through purchasing their goods. To illustrate, after Qatar became a wealthy nation their residents started to buy expensive cars and construct modern skyscrapers which closely affect the economy of the USA or other developed countries. Every year approximately a thousand highly qualified employees working in Dubai from Europe. All this co-operation relatively greatly promote to advancing economy of the world.
To conclude, globalization may bring negative consequences or benefits and it depends on developing countries.
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- Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution Do you agree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich will be considered. To begin with, globalization plays a crucial role in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42756183746 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04261828074 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593639575972 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9897947349 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115227433279 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433758931747 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231839962712 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740175520203 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169347021497 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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