Coin and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and debit card.Eventually, we will have cashless society which will be safer and more convenient to everyone.
coins and paper cash will shortly be restored by credit and debit card. Sooner or later, we will have cashless community which aim to be protected and more beneficial for all. In my opinion it is difficult to decide that this may result in advantage for all. It will be useful for people living in urban regions while in rural regions this may not be suitable.
In urban areas corporate institutions mainly focus on development of the society be making every aspect digitalized. We can observe the changes in technology over the past decade. It is evident that at this rate one day there might be only credit and debit card transactions and not cash. This helps the people in urban areas because we can see ATM machines every where if this rule comes up we might see online transaction machines in each store. This brings up benefits like faster transactions, less human effort is needed, no need of carrying cash in wallets and the main advantage is there exists no robbery as everything is protected.
However this won't be popular or beneficial in rural areas by cause of most of them being illiterates. They are habituated to transactions using cash by introducing these credit and debit cards it becomes tough for them to get used to these. Although we can cut this issue by conducting classes for using these cards and promoting them . In result we can expect most of them accepting this but there may be few who oppose this approach.
In conclusion my opinion is to encourage the development of technology but not at the cost of people's disagreement. I support online transactions as they are an advantage but replacing them with money is not a suitable step, government should consider this point.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7972972973 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65302773382 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1699998325 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265433595634 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102459043783 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116586716582 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158670824136 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13307700646 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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