Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss pros and cons of change in communication.
Nowadays, the question of "whether Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years or not" has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that modern communication is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully weigh up the pros and cons of this subject.
To begin with, it is a common belief that smartphones and the Internet play a vital role in societies. First and foremost is that earlier people had to visit together to convey their message, but now they just click a button and the message is delivered easily at any corner of the world. Secondly, the internet has made our lives so convenient especially for overseas students to make a video and audio chat with their family as well as it gives us this opportunity to broaden our horizon in terms of medical and educational fields. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the personal safety apps in smartphones provide us a GPS tracking system to go home safety even midnight. A group of scientists, working at a prestigious university expressed that new methods of communication have made us more prosperous in recent years.
However, there is no doubt that the new communication provides us with various negative points. It can be taken into account that the majority of criminals are rooted in the Internet and cellphones. Moreover, mobile phones have caused people get introvert. For instance, there is mounting evidence that proves, the Internet consist of a wide variety of unpleasant programs from violence to sex contents.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that promoting communication must be taken into consideration. Since every garden may have weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...de us more prosperous in recent years. However, there is no doubt that the new ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16721311475 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02910010735 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632786885246 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3632703315 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138528572619 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383828008417 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643971664415 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837626502711 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101828232977 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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