In today’s high speed technology gears, communication media have been strengthen their infrastructures as well as other materials in all field of technology and the way of human life. Of course, the materials aforementioned above are the communication media, however there are majority of them such as, internet, youtube, instagram, telegram channels, to name but a few, too. Among those that the examiner mentioned, I prefer opting book, film and radio.
At first, I want to extend my opinion about books. Books’ content, sometimes, contain the emotion of writers, the way of their life, their experiences, morality, wisdoms, emotions and memories. These kind of books, can be very helpful for majority of people. They can learn the way of real life, being honest and kind with each other, helping them binding their relationships and sometimes by picking up a book they would be able to chill out and clean their noisy mind from any stress and anxiety. Some books have educational content and they are full of knowledge and information, they are really are necessary for solving any problem and answering any query. Books are portable and everyone can get the book that he/she would like to read. There is no necessity for people to read the book that they don’t like the content of it. However, production of books needs chopping up the trees and it would destroy our jungles and would affect the environment. Another issue is about writers opinion because sometimes, writers, like to instill their thinking to readers and it can have harmful effects.
Films are the best way for chilling out. We can choose any film in our free times and watch movies with our family or friends, laying on a canape or in cinema. Sometime, it happens to me that I really loose the track of time by watching a movie and my mind really begin to refresh itself for doing another hard works that my mind knocked on them seriously. Some films make us familiar with other cultures and help people to know more about people of other countries and it is very mesmerizing to encourage people to learn more about another cultures to be kind with themselves. However, there are bad content in some movies that are really destructive and can increase crimes. Another issue is about time of our teenagers, juveniles, sometimes, waste their precious time by watching films and would miss their daily important works such as studying their school lessons.
Radio is the most available medium, for example in driving, traveling, in mountainous and in poor areas it is always easy to access. Radio has its special clients but, new generation is unfamiliar with this. Broadcasting news, documentaries, vocal films and many other programs are very interesting for me. But, some people believe that lack of having any vision broadcasting make this medium weak among its counterparts.
Among all of aforementioned medias, I think radio films are the top communication medium, because it is not harmful for environment as well as book productions and old fashioned with having no visual options such as radio.
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010 67
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should be only allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both these views and 56
- The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make co 78
- Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the government of richer nation should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such area. 73
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'strengthened'.
Suggestion: strengthened
...gy gears, communication media have been strengthen their infrastructures as well as other ...
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Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
Suggestion: majorities
... communication media, however there are majority of them such as, internet, youtube, ins...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...rality, wisdoms, emotions and memories. These kind of books, can be very helpful for major...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to bind' or 'bind'.
Suggestion: to bind; bind
... and kind with each other, helping them binding their relationships and sometimes by pi...
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Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...wledge and information, they are really are necessary for solving any problem and a...
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Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...having no visual options such as radio.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, still, then, well, for example, i think, kind of, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 1615.20841683 160% => OK
No of words: 515.0 315.596192385 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03300970874 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69805807775 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516504854369 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 794.7 506.74238477 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5048613051 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.695652174 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3913043478 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154336035905 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494542984118 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382749201449 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978424188488 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027773425434 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.