The main and essential infrastructures of any country and in an extended meaning, every society, is education. I don’t refuse the importance of health and trade, but in my opinion, by having a high quality educational systems, health and trade spontaneously would come in.
In many under developing countries and maybe sometimes even in industrialized countries Japan’s educational infrastructures would be considered as a model for people. Japanese have a high quality educational systems helping their future generations to learn many essential proper way of living, especially social appropriate behaviors, respect for others, honesty, fidelity, to name but a few. Therefore, when a child learn enough about morality, he/she never would think about bad behaviors and it would help to have a self-rounded personality. Because of good morality it is not important that future generations would get which kind of job in their future life. Because these generations would become prosper in every field of their jobs and would make their society full of prosperity. For example, they will be able to make high technological devices, will improve transform systems, will help together and the work efficiency would tend to increase day by day and by continuing these circulation, they become as a society an industrialized country full of prosperity.
Trade and health are not the only things that would tend to develop countries and poor countries would prosper in their economy. There are many countries that have a strong trading system, but, because of lack of proper management system coming from weak educational infrastructures, unfortunately, become poorer day by day. As far as I’m concerned, health is more important than education and trade for prosperity of every society. However, without education and trading, it is impossible to have a healthy society. Furthermore, people should have money to cover their health related expenses and don’t have worries about this issue. I think it can come true by full health insurance for everyone.
All in all, for having a prosper and healthy society it is important to have strong educational infrastructures helping prosperity in trades, bringing money for country and speeding up the technology gears.
- the bar charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing coutries and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990 78
- the table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999 67
- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment 67
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'would' and 'think'.
Suggestion: would never think
...ild learn enough about morality, he/she never would think about bad behaviors and it would help t...
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Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...elp to have a self-rounded personality. Because of good morality it is not important th...
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Line 3, column 943, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p together and the work efficiency would tend to increase day by day and by conti...
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Line 3, column 991, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this circulation' or 'these circulations'?
Suggestion: this circulation; these circulations
...o increase day by day and by continuing these circulation, they become as a society an industrial...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...for everyone. All in all, for having a prosper and healthy society it is important to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45480225989 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08462805802 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511299435028 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3652375139 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.733333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188458275818 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721868500741 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047975699291 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127376557513 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412305710976 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.