There are a lot of media types to communicate information, some of them are more effective than others. In the further paragraphs, I will expose the advantages and disadvantages of three of them; television, radio, and theater, as for their effectiveness to communicate.
Fist of all, related to their benefits, this types of media are broadcast live. This is a tremendous advantage, because it permits to correct and add information while it is being delivered. For instance, if news are running and an earthquake occurs somewhere in the world, it can be inmediatly showed on television. The same happens with radio, but this cannot happen in the newspaper for example, because it is printed the day before. As for the theater, actors can forget the exact words that they have to say, but this does not really matter if they maintain the main idea.
On the other hand, these three media types have a few drawbacks. Firstly, television and radio can deliver very useful information, like in documentaries and news, but they also broadcast shows with poor content. Related to television, if a child just watches cartoons will not obtain very useful information. The same happens with radio if someone just listens to music, the quality of the information will be poor. As for theater, its main disadvantage is related with its public, nowadays just a few people like theater.
As a conclusion, I think that, even though these three media types have a few drawbacks, the fact that they are broadcasted live and can be modified, interrupted and perfected in the moment, make television, radio and theater the most effective ones to communicate information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'correcting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: correcting
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Message: Did you mean 'think'?
Suggestion: think
...ple like theater. As a conclusion, I thin that, even though this three media type...
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Suggestion: at the moment
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Suggestion:
...ve ones to communicate information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10276679842 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89582276708 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553359683794 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.188033198 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.363636364 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199044482588 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794719578434 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451796110409 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136706747821 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378525292201 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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