Competitiveness is considered to be a positive quality among people.
How does competitiveness affect individuals?
Is competitiveness a positive or negative qualities?
Nowadays, competitiveness is claimed as a substantial positive quality among populace by related-specialists. By diverse ways competitiveness may influence on people nevertheless, I suppose it is a beneficial quality.
It is clear that people are affected by competitiveness. Individuals who are competitive try to be first of all and this manner may cause dissatisfaction among them, especially when they are not able to cope with their opponents. In addition sometimes competitiveness provoke people to proceed any unethical doing against their rivals. By the way, competitiveness deter indi...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ways'' or 'way's'?
Suggestion: ways'; way's
...lace by related-specialists. By diverse ways competitiveness may influence on people...
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Suggestion: addition,
...t able to cope with their opponents. In addition sometimes competitiveness provoke peopl...
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Suggestion: addition,
...ividuals from enjoying team working. In addition hardly are they able to experience the ...
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Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are hardly
...from enjoying team working. In addition hardly are they able to experience the pleasure of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le to condone the other values of life. On the other hand, competitiveness may l...
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Suggestion: .
...ort more to acquire the best situation. . In fact people who have competitivenes...
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Suggestion: addition,
...from each other during the learning. In addition competitive people always try to keep t...
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Suggestion: Indeed,
...eir readiness for every sudden contest. Indeed they have an organized plan and because...
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Suggestion: affect
...hough like many other qualities, it may effect on people by different ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, nevertheless, so, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, by the way, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56809338521 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53293032182 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6746999059 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306792265472 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119003281503 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739701807437 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208421218334 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703987361771 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.