Completing university education is though by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Education and professional career are interdependent. Many people opine that completing education can help you a fetch a good job, however there are others who counter this view and claim that professional experience and soft skills are more important.
University Education is meant to provide theoretical knowledge in the subject which we are interested. After completing graduation, when we apply for jobs, this knowledge comes very handy in explaining what we know about our area of interest. Although we couldn’t showcase our practical exposure, knowledge we gather during our curriculum can be enough to get our first job. Also, many big Industries during their recruitment process short list candidates based on educational qualification, since this is the best way to segregate the right applicants from numerous applications they have received. It is during these phase that having an education qualification gives an edge over others.
However, after we get our first break it all depends on how we work in the organisation and what we learn, that helps us to succeed further in our career. Our second job or promotions depends not only on the level of education but also on our professional experience and what kind of skills we have developed during our tenure in the organisation. Many prominent business leaders like Elon Musk of Tesla have regularly emphasised on experience over education also, many successful business founders like Mark Zukerburg of Facebook are college dropouts.
In Conclusion, I do believe university education can help us to get our first big break of our career, however it if very important after that how professionally we develop ourselves to succeed. And even though we may not have an educational degree, but with good practical knowledge and willingness to learn we can still get our desired job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... that completing education can help you a fetch a good job, however there are others wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30405405405 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01959565294 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577702702703 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9668640201 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.833333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193708385156 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806546703664 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621082484233 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145112924354 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616802906836 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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