Completing university education is thought to be by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, getting experience and developing soft skills are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that enrolling in university is the best way to get a good job while others think that it is more vital to get experience and develop soft skills. In my opinion, a university degree is critical but not as important as experience and soft skills.
On one hand, I believe that it is easier to have a job if you have experience and soft skills. Firstly, companies and corporations are more likely to hire persons with experience as the staff thinks that experienced people will perform the job better and effectively than those who don’t have any experience before since individuals who have previous work experience were trained and had such skills for the job. Therefore, they can reduce the cost to train the new staff. Secondly, soft skills are one of the key requirements to be recruited. For example, teamwork is the basic skill that every company must require a candidate to have as they require a team effort. Also, in the current society, an employee is required to have clear communication and listening skills to communicate with clients or foreign language to talk with customers in various countries.
On the other hand, completing university education is essential to aim for a good job due to the fact that qualifications and degrees are always listed by recruiters in any job advertisement. This is because getting a degree proves that you have certain knowledge and training in university. Moreover, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher, or lawyer without having adequate qualifications. As a result, those who finished university have access to better job opportunities and likely to have a well-paid job.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they have experience and develop soft skills than completing university education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91936923518 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2737268292 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316797716397 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116665014211 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10963228081 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226095807922 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113454938775 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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