Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting exeprience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and given your opinion.
Some people believed that having a university degree is the key in finding a successful career, while other argue that it is through gaining necessary experiences and skills. In my opinion, although college diploma is an important requirements in some professions, communication and technical skills are also vital in other industry.
On one hand, it is thought by some that graduating in a university is the most important factor in securing a job. Professions that needs specific qualifications such as medical doctors is a perfect example. It is impossible to earn the title without enrolling in a college and completing the course. In addition to that, people who have more trainings and certifications have a higher chance to be employed as it advances them in the competitive job market.
Ont he other hand, some people think that soft skills are more vital in landing a god job. It is certainly true in the business world because attracting customers requires good communication, management and technical skills. These skills are not developed overnight but by learnings from past failures. A person who has a good background in handling and managing people has an edge over other applicants aiming for the same position.
FInally, in my opinion, the best way to a be employed depends on the skills you aim to belong with. College diplomas are essential in Health and Education Sector while skills in business is equally important to a successful operation of the company.
In conclusion, being a degree holder hold as much important as having skills in communication and technology in securing a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'requirement'?
Suggestion: requirement
...lthough college diploma is an important requirements in some professions, communication and ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...FInally, in my opinion, the best way to a be employed depends on the skills you aim ...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g a degree holder hold as much important as having skills in communication and te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14015151515 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02096810282 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8885503795 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312212086618 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989388312524 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765032890994 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151350853046 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520193687114 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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