Contemporarily, the modern appliances have been become an integeral part of human's life as it has facilitated the life tremendously. It has both precarious and efficacious sides. I assert, it is a optimistic development and the reasons for this assertaion are being elaborated below.
To commence, the possessions today people posses, have plethora of advantageous effects on their daily life. Initially,people can pursue for all their household chores efficiently and spending miniscule amount of time.Especially, the women who used to striken to the domestic work only but now using machanical devices they can simultaneously perform their professional duties as well. Moreover, having these gizmos has been increasingly becoming a status symbol among people. A person is not considered affluent untill he has the updated devices. For instance,having smartphones of apple series is associated with reflection of richness.
Probing further, not only this but also provides a luxurious an comfortable lifestyle to the general populace. The quality of the life has been improved with the usage of new technical gadgets. To be more precise,esay communication and trasportation is a magnificient use of the consumer goods has promoted the international tourism and export import .only the invention of peoples demas and aspirations.
Regardless of this, the tendency becoming the invention of peoples demas and aspirations has sinister sides too. Initially, it widens the discrimination among different classes of the society and also the richer are becoming more richer and destitues always remain backward in the community. Adding more, as the knowledge of theses products spreads worldwide, the endeavours rises for consumer commodities which ultimately gives birth to inflation. Additionally,people's lust to purchase more and more goods makes them extravagant because they consume the products merely to decorate themseves and their houses whichthey actually do not need sometimes .
Although, the trend has certain drawbacks but the profits of the same are more alluring and overeclipce the grey side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71428571429 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3129510906 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64126984127 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5715374563 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179794821313 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473354896066 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529741438875 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774284857117 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465967197852 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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