In recent years, the world is becoming a global village. Some people believe that there are so many disadvantages for any nations while others think that people can purchase the same products anywhere around the world which is good. This essay will discuss why this is a positive development and explain some examples.
If any same products or items are available all around the world, it will help students who are studying in a foreign country. In addition, it will affect their lifestyles. For example, there are plenty of Asian students are studying in European countries so all their basic needs such as shampoo, soap and hair oil that are used in their native country and the same brand of products are available there that is why it will be beneficial. In short, because of the availability of products globally, foreign students will find their needs easily.
There are a lot of brands' and companies' products are available around the world so they will impact in a positive manner for countries' economic growth. Moreover, it is a good way to make jobs for people. For instance, a number of Chinese companies shops are available in India, Governments should take taxes for selling their products like mobiles, computers and laptops. As a result, economic sustainability will increase and many jobs will create in nations. Overall, reduce unemployment and the growth of the economy is crucial for any nations and its citizens.
It is increasingly likely that allowing foreign brands and availability of any products in every nation will affect in good ways. However, there are minor disadvantages. Ultimately, this development leads to several positive aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...le around the world so they will impact in a positive manner for countries economic growth. Moreover...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1204379562 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70939869359 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514598540146 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.528144604 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175355007869 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604835836387 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544105084198 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116849812901 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583964339385 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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