Somebody thinks that the uncomplicated buying purchase of people for getting the same productions all around the world is making characteristics of numerous countries similarly. I personally disagree with that opinion based on my own experiences.
There is no denying that it is easily to find the variety of commodities from other countries in shopping malls or also small shops with all prices. Widely broadening individual culture and traditional to world market can bring a large benefit for one particular area and with the better assistance of investors from government and organizations in terms of tourism industry, social media, modern facilities, rising opportunities,…, the improving of financial and reputation development in other different continents can also come true no far.
The features of country is created from its long history with special group activities, beautiful landmarks, significant events,…, when local people make it more and more widespread, it can be seem as they have large respect, huge love for their ancient property and other countries correctly recognize their wonderful lasting effort. Additionally, the great shopping choices also become various and abundant for clients, buying needs can fastly increase with unique products, delicate skills, professional research,.., giving the best overall advantages for both individuals and general organizations.
Conclusion, the likeable goods sold everywhere in the world make customers easily approach more dissimilar countries and improve their own distinctive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86343612335 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13590796488 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691629955947 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.927035065 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.142857143 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4285714286 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188585821372 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827934642858 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688105149438 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117877840722 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044703749792 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.3 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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