Along with the evolution of intergration, it is more likely that nations around the globe are becoming more and more correspondent. There is a question about whether this tendency is good or not. This essay will point out my view about the issue.
In terms of disadvantages, being similar between each country could lead to the loss of culture if we just accept everything coming into our territory without any concerns. The contemporary time has witnessed many cases of cutural erosion by the excessive imitation of world trend and ignorance the core original value. For instance, there are many teenagers nowadays try to change the national languages into teencode and even abuse it in almost situations of life. Furthermore, if places are identical, there is no use travelling from country to country anymore, which means we can have every commodity we need by just staying at home and it definitely affects tourism in the world.
On the other hand, it is not always the pitfall if we look the matter in more positive sight. Having things in common can be appreciated for those which increase the quality of life for residents and accepted widely by national governments. That is also the proof of integration to show the unity and understanding between countries, which is a base for worldwide cooperation in the future. As a result, the world seems to be equal somehow as it is guaranteed that if the inhabitants of developed countries have something new to consume, people in developing countries must also.
In conclusion, I insist that similarity probably is the problem in case we let our precious traditions involved and shifted too much. But it must have been useful if we know when to be the same with others and when to be unique in our own way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...me, people in developing countries must also. In conclusion, I insist that similari...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85382059801 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76649048589 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621262458472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9948057489 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190355128995 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584176604978 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743373770669 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10389773484 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475884904942 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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