Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Usage of the internet has been increasing day by day in today's world. Some people assert that similar trends have been increasing within all the countries all over the world because people can buy the products at any time. In my viewpoint, this is a positive development due to the following compelling reasons.
Globalization is one of the key factors that rule these days. People from different countries can transfer their ideologies and thought processing works through the internet within a fraction of seconds. One part of the republic is famous for one stock, whereas the other is famous for other things. For example, Korea is famous for its beauty properties. No other kingdom can replace the standards of Korean beauty products. A normal person can purchase anything online as per their wish. Therefore, this helps to grow the cultural benefits between the different states.
The economy is an area of production, distribution, and consumption of goods and services by different agents in the world. It is also responsible for the well-being of an individual in society. By buying the commodities from the websites available online, there will be substantial growth in the country's economy. To illustrate, an apple phone was first discovered by Steve jobs, an American businessman. Most people all over the world are fond of using Apple gadgets. Almost 10 in 1 people are habituated to using iPhones instead of Android phones. This, in turn, helps to raise the economy of a country. This is one of the beneficial factors to the nation's development.
To recapitulate it, as it stands now, people will be able to cultivate cultural habitats, desired goods and services when they buy them anywhere in the world and thus help to enrich the nation's economy in all the aspects is a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78622604172 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6450838997 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5263157895 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188299024507 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474847610305 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542916502801 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121923000805 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697557821276 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.