Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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...r country but also throughout the world.While I understand that critics may see this ...
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... see this is an invasion of the society.I would argue that there are far more ben...
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... in clothing to buy the traditional one.In general, in modern era, people are very...
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...are very influence to wear modern brands,which are quite famous throughout the world, ...
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...keep pace with the contemporary fashion.Furthermore, by compassing traditional market,it be...
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...ermore, by compassing traditional market,it becomes instability in the shop owner, ...
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...othing in the shop in international one.Apart from this, it affects to earn revenue i...
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...ue in any state,which known as GDP that is mainly depending on the traditional business in the glob...
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...on the traditional business in the globe .Hence,global market not only dispel the ...
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...far away from the own traditional norms.The most valuable thing is that all are not...
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... a lot of price, which is not affordable,in essence,for the poor people in the soci...
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...rice, which is not affordable,in essence,for the poor people in the society.If any p...
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...ence,for the poor people in the society.If any people work as a Clark, for example...
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...is some positive development for various reasons. Firstly,there are no hindrance ...
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...evelopment for various reasons. Firstly,there are no hindrance among the countries th...
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... various reasons. Firstly,there are no hindrance among the countries throughout the worl...
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...mong the countries throughout the world.All walk of people can together a specific ...
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...ve any discrimination among the citizen.In addition to this,it makes a overwhelm r...
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...ple to work or study in the booming one.By throwing international events, all coun...
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...w their fashion and beauty that attract a lot of spectator and make an awareness to build up bilat...
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...eness to build up bilateral relationship,which increase economic growth as well as div...
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...growth as well as diversity relationship among the countries. China ,for instance...
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...son as a role model of fashion designer.In other words, all people are not capable...
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...he beauty in any country, which attract lots of visitor to go in enjoying their cultural activi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as well as, in other words, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28805620609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20610524439 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526932084309 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 317.881635794 49.4020404114 643% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.25 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.375 20.7667163134 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.125 7.06120827912 356% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218139832054 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903035422154 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544002421155 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133816090694 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335404776163 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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