These days it is often considered that countries are benefitted due to various people living their who follow different culture and tradition. I completely agree with this statement because when there are mixture of people with different culture they create tourism activity such as cultural tourism and food tourism by which people show interest and want to learn more about them, for this they travel from one country to other by such action they create touristic value to the country. In this essay we will discuss on how people with various culture will contribute in the growth of a country.
At first, I believe that people who follow different culture are very unique and it is very interesting to learn about these people. They follow different lifestyle and have amazing festivals as well by this a lot of people get attracted to their culture furthermore they will show interest to study about them. In this generation most of the people who are from different community are always interested in learning different cultures and how they value to the society. In reference to my country Nepal cultural tourism is very famous because there are many people who follow different culture and have different lifestyle. For example there's a community who are called "Raute" in my country they follow different culture as compared to Hindus. They mostly live in the jungles of far west, Also they are unknown about the modern technologies and follow different way of living researchers and tourist from different country come to Nepal to study about their lifestyle in this way when people travel from one country to other they will spend their currency in our country which will help in economic growth an development of the country.
Secondly, these days food tourism is also being highlighted in the world through different social media platforms. People who follow different culture also have various unknown dishes due to which food lovers from many countries are often impressed by them and they fly from their country of residence to other country just to try out their food. For instance, there's a food blogger who has around 1 million followers in his channel food ranger on social media he travels to different country and try various foods made by people who follow unique culture by doing this he spends a lot of money to taste their unknown dishes by this the community will also get economic help and they spend the money in their own country. Moreover, this activity will somehow contribute to the growth of the country.
To conclude, I strongly believe that people who follow different culture are also one of the reason for helping in development of the country by creating touristic values and importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2288.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00656455142 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49587088203 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.382932166302 0.561755894193 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0161809081 49.4020404114 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.428571429 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6428571429 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298344353024 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136097735861 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684475984429 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212658908141 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261567185033 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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