In countries, people live in a big city, I’d like alone or in small family unit, rather than a large, extended family groups. Is this positive or negative trend?
In modern life, people become independent as well as personal lifestyle come to be enhanced. However, some prefer to live in a big family with many generations. I would argue that a later option leads to undesirable issues.
To begin with, the generation gap is a fence separating family members, quite a large family leads to many conflicts. Nowadays, youngsters have more audacity compared to the past. As a result, they break taboos and traditional customs which are rejected by the elderly. Older people always want their children to obey; nonetheless, younger ones do not like their elders intervening too much in their lives. If a multi-child family according to a somehow drawback, children must share their benefits with siblings, and as a result reduce the quality of life.
Secondly, the shrinking family or alone life can be considered as evidence to prove a lower risk lifestyle. A small family with fewer generations living in the same household can avoid conflicts and gap generations. Therefore, the relationship between family members become much close-knit. In addition, parents having fewer children will take care of their kids thoughtfully, this helps these families having a life comfortable and facilities than the multi-child families.
In conclusion, humans always seek a life which is least pressure results from work and relationships from outside making them feel suffocating. A family is a peaceful landing in which any member also can get sympathy and sharing. Thus, the modern trend direct to a small family and single is a good way to entitle people to interest themselves and lovers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2337164751 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86512682412 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6849951548 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22015766376 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697624842394 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563051185167 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129348363948 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334520658062 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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