Courses and general online study have recently become very popular. However, some people still prefer to attend classes in person. Discuss both views
In today’s world, online study is widely used because of the rapidly developing pace of modern technologies. Nevertheless, many people still prefer to attend face-to-face classes. From my point of view, both of the views have their own merits which require careful consideration.
First and foremost, online study is essential in some countries nowadays, because of the spread of Covid-19 which has caused the death of nearly 850 thousand people over the world. any countries such as Vietnam, Korea, China and so on have had
to implement the “social distancing” policy to protect their citizens from this infectious disease. That leads to the fact that students are not able to go to school. Obviously, in this situation, studying online is the only way which can help students maintain their study.
On the other hand, despite the popularity of online study, many people are in favour of joining classes in person. The clearest advantage of this studying method is that it allows students to practice together with their classmates easily, which studying online has some obstacles to do. Studies in this field have shown that people who study with their friends after school always get higher marks in their exams than the others who don’t.
In addition, another plus point of studying at school is that teachers can exactly control and examine the understanding level of their students. This is because answering the teachers’ questions reflects how a student comprehends a lesson. Consequently, it is easy for teachers to change their teaching ways as well as their curriculums to be suitable for students. In contrast, studying online is not able to reassure the understanding level since students can use the Internet to cheat.
Given the aforementioned points, it may be concluded that both online and traditional studying methods provide different positive aspects. However, from my perspective, the traditional class is better than the online in education
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, in addition, in contrast, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29206349206 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7875474455 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7129426185 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23502515013 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766878528841 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555771610024 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121239235687 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703525639554 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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