Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
It is true that crime has become a big problem worldwide. While many people argue that there are no solutions to this, I strongly believe that some measures can still be taken to tackle this problem.
It cannot be denied that the main solution is creating more rehabilitation programs for prisoners instead of punishment. Firstly, prisoners will receive education or vocational training, which will play a vital role in teaching them personal skills as well as specific job skills. Therefore, they are more likely to find job-opportunities and earn their living when they go out of prison. Moreover, rehabilitated prisoners stand fewer chances of re-offending as the aim of rehabilitation is to make them better citizens.
Furthermore, the most urgent measure is to educate children from young age. For example, parents should be provided with parental skills to teach their sons or daughters and police officers should inform students about the pernicious impacts of life in prisons. Besides, knowledge related to crime should be put into school curriculums and educational films. Finally, teenagers are more likely to take advice from reformed offenders as they can speak from their experiences. They will tell youngsters about how they involved, dangers of criminal lifestyle, what life in prison is like and dispel any ideas that they lead glamorous lifestyle in prisons. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories may have powerful effects.
In conclusion, although crime is one of the biggest problem in the world, we should together prevent this by implementing measures mentioned above
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? 84
- More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks? 61
- In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their ageing members. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Many people think that men should go out to work while women place is in the home To what extent do you agree or disagree 91
- Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35039370079 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83983831043 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681102362205 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6714227854 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120299738772 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447148990316 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548909749137 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945250576526 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070419385514 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.