Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it. Agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
crime is one of the major issues that all the countries have been facing recently. It is argure that there is nothing that can be done to prevent crime. In my opinion, i completely disagree with this view and feel that crime rate can be controlled with appropriate measures.
on the one hand, some people believe that crime can not be regulated. According to them, criminals prevail all over the world and they try to commit various illegal activities. However, almost lawbreakers were not nurtured in loved unconditionally or had unstable condition, as they want to earn more money but in wrong ways such as robbery, theft, murder and so on. To prevent crime rates, eac famiy and individual has responsibility for this problems. Parents play a grater role in teaching their children how to becam a productive members of society when they were a child. Likewsie, each individuals also has enough knowledge about these crimes, has enough conscious of their activities.
On the other hand, the role of local authorities have a powerful impact in minimize social problems. Government need o address the issues by some measures like enhance police power, provide relief to children is living under the poverty line. One explanation for that is teenagers are tend to dug abuse and underage drinking or they seek more money and material sastisfaction in recent years, the effective measure is introduce some deterrent force in areas which has high crime rate.
In conclusion, i feel that the only logical conclusion is that crime can be prvented through appropriate action by the government and indviduals.
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| 2023-05-14 | Tran Ngoc Dan Thuy | 78 | view |
- Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it Agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words 78
- Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it Agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08301886792 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74979140929 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1478851798 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.615384615 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158085666763 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639610226969 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717610704092 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972316689774 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061461170242 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.