High rate of crime is more prevalent in the urban areas because of over population and diverse range of people come to dwell the urban areas, rather than rural areas where everyone is familiar with each other. the problem of crime rate in urban areas can be ameliorate in different ways
First job opportunities should be readily available to the working populations, for example in Nigeria if there is always availability of job, the youths would not ventures into kidnapping, scanning people on internet and so on. So government should make available of job for youths after graduation and in an equitable assigning of the work.
Another way to mitigate the high rate of crime is to provision of tight security in the urban areas. The issue of security conscious can not be over looked in terms of crime rate , well trained forces should be instigated in various places,and also local vigilantes.
Finally the uneducated population should be made self employed by giving them government incentives and training them in the various minial works such as hair dressing, sewing, agricultural.
In conclusion the ever increasing crime rate in urban areas can be minimised by providing job and also provision of security, providing incentives to the people in various sectors.if government will be able to make provision of these services, there will be little or no crime in the cities.
- The technology development has affected social relationships from person to person Do the positive aspects of this trend outweigh the negative aspects 61
- Nowadays the rise of consumerism has become a hot topic Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 11
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- Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying 50
- scientific theories which most people consider as fact almost invariably prove to be inaccurate Thus one shud look upon any information described as factual with skepticism since it may well be proven false in the future Write an essy in which u take a 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05676855895 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76311103807 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550218340611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0402538061 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.428571429 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7142857143 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309401226973 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147311033521 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932559320819 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173490872728 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141968501442 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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