Currently, there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays, there are alternative usages of medicine, and absolutely is a controversial issue. Some people believed that these kinds of methods are not enough sufficient and useful, while others believe that is a good idea to examine new alternative methods in medicine and medical sciences. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss this issue and will paraphrase this topic.
Thanks to technology, are occurred different methods in medicine, and now we can use some special drugs for different illnesses. This kind of trend was used in the past for curing some unknown sicknesses, but that time mainly because of lacking science in medicine most of the people missed their life.
On the one hand, alternative forms of medicine in some ways are ineffective or even can be dangerous. The reason why is, for doctors or experts in this field does not accept the side effects of alternative ways or drugs. On the other hand, they believe that the condition of the human body and some scientific factors vary from person to person, so they cannot make a comprehensive decision.
Last but not least, the use of the alternative form of medicines in some situation is unavoidable. For instance, for some people who suffer from bad injuries or damages in an accident, doctors for saving their life have to use these kinds of methods.
To conclude, every new method and alternative ways have their own advantages and disadvantages, but experts are should aware of these pros and cons and try to improve them, and decrease the side effects of them especially the worst ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s of them especially the worst ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71555518137 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569811320755 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.78082893 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.454545455 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164913016933 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688319295859 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320162460609 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913185921835 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184718854204 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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