Cycling has many benefits , yet in some countries there is a decrease in number of people using bicycles as their main form of transport. Why is it happening ? give suggestions how to encourage people to use bicycles again.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
The recent statistics have witnessed downward trend of using bikes despite the advantages it might intervene in environmental issues. The phenomenon has aroused wide suggestion that bicycle should become extensively optimal. Nonetheless, at this point, there is no relevant approaching to the complication, which had attributed to great controversies. In these following aspects, I will illustrates the cause as well as the solutions for the crisis.
Indisputably, cycling can not be comparable to other vehicles due to the potential convenience they provide for utilises. Apparently, distinct speed and effort to maintain these means of transportation is the main component to isolate cycling to be less favourable. On the congestive era, quickness and efficient is the priority - something it could ensure for riders. For instance, the majority of office workers nowadays ought to travel in excessive distance. For guaranteeing their arrival, they wouldn't insist on using such a effortful and decelerate means. However, we must consider on the intensive revolution of climate in the contemporary where the great proportion of its root is gases from fuel - consuming vehicles. moreover, obesity is increasing rapidly in the latest decade. In that case, the best replacement as well as address for the problem is by promoting more cycling.
Unfortunately, people's unstable determination intercept the propaganda from operation. As a result, more and more residents spend on cars in, unsurprisingly, large scale. verifying the root itself enables us to conduct the right path to find out the suitable framework. First, taxation on bikes and its equipment must decline into appropriate prices to absorb more customers. Second, formal workplace must stimulate their employees to adapt with cycling. As a good example to be demonstrated, Northern European nations establish their exclusive date called '' cycling date". Finally, even governments and authorities are expected to become the light for citizens to follow, which can proceed the propaganda more practical.
From what I have discussed above, it is high time we must act on to converse the benefits of bicycle. In order to save the enviroment and enhancing more healthy life for a better living standard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57803468208 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11512278394 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658959537572 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5518563615 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.9047619048 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4761904762 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127189665145 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311448761143 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288392835427 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658807844619 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252654866688 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.