Demand of food is increasing
Food is a one of the basic needs of a human being. Globally, every year food consumption is rapidly growing and becoming a topic of grave concern in the upcoming years. This essay deal with the hike in the food consumption reasons and steps to catch the raising food demands along with my opinion.
First of all, the rapid growth in population is main cause of increasing food consumption. According to the senses of 2011, world population growth rate is about 3 percentage and cross the mark of 9 billion by 2030. Moreover, Now days most of the societies are adapting the consumerism culture, which leads to a food wastage. WHO, such as , recently publish a report in which organisation mention that every year more than 100 tons of food going to waste.
However, countries are join hands with each other to tackle this problem. In the developed nations, farmers are using a new method, techniques and advance technology to raise the crops production.Moreover, these developed nations are share their method and technology with developing countries to increase food production and reduce the food wastage. Apart from that, scientist are also developing a hybrid crops and plants with better production rate.
In the conclusion, i am saying that the cut the food wastage is necessary as increase the food production.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, apart from, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00909090909 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82470389774 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8955431812 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.181818182 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375472301921 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127759056664 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108981068325 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230688380365 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855841576056 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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