In this day and age, advertisement is becoming one of the most effective ways for businesses to introduce their products. There is an argument about advertising that its power, not the demand of the society for products are sold, is shown by the high incomes of consumer items. In my opinion, I do not agree with this idea.
People who recommend that the high sales of those things reflect the power of advertising have their own reason. nowaday, there are a lot of famous goods do not meet the requirements of consumers, while they still earn a lot of money for business. It is due to the fact that these products have excellent advertising which is attractive to many people. For example, Apple purchased the Iphone 11 in June 2015, while the Iphone 11s was released 2 months later with very slight developments. It is clear that people do not need to have the latter version while the former is still working effectively, but they are likely to pay more to follow the trend. As a result, Iphones have huge incomes from buying their products every year.
However, I believe that most people buy popular products based on their demand and they are not affected by advertising alone. Indeed, although the advertisements are pretty attractive, not everyone has the ability to purchase them easily. They still have to pay for other aspects of life, such as healthcare or food that they only would like to buy goods that they need. a new car, for example, has safer features, or is more economical to operate. Thus, enhancing their quality of life.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowaday
...r of advertising have their own reason. nowaday, there are a lot of famous goods do not...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...would like to buy goods that they need. a new car, for example, has safer feature...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78301886792 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52463829188 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1098846692 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1818181818 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195201931396 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764416099673 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542044500048 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157590541036 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00483770908201 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowaday
...r of advertising have their own reason. nowaday, there are a lot of famous goods do not...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...would like to buy goods that they need. a new car, for example, has safer feature...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78301886792 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52463829188 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1098846692 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1818181818 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195201931396 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764416099673 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542044500048 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157590541036 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00483770908201 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.