Describe your favorite hobby, pastime, or sport, and explain how it reflects your personality.
Hello there! I'm Nga. Today, I would like to introduce my hobby. I have some pastime activities. I'm keen on catching a flick, listening to some tunes, going backpacking, and working out. Among them, listening to some tunes is my cup of tea. Music is an inseparable part of my life. Since childhood, listening to music has become my hobby because it is very relaxing and enjoyable. I can listen to my favorite tunes every day because it helps me to relieve stress and anxiety. I'm a die-hard of pop, R&B, and rap music. Personally, it doesn't matter in which language a song is, or who the singer is as long as I enjoy the melody. And my all-time favorite song is "Double take" by Dhruv. This song is about a man falling in love with his best friend. It is a gentle and romantic song with a bit of sadness. I first heard this song on Spotify a year ago. At first, what I like most about this song is that it has a catchy tune but a meaningful flow. Music is a universal language enjoyed by people, from all cultures, and it has proven to be a great source of entertainment. In fact, listening to music helps me unwind after a hard-working day because I can enjoy the feeling of listening to a song. It improves my mood and emotions and gives me a positive outlook on life. In addition, when I listen to music, I feel it can help me promote focus and concentration so that I can focus more effectively on the work I am doing. I also do yoga and exercise a few times a week, and working out with music improves my mood and helps my body move more efficiently. When I have a stressful day, one of the best things I can do is to sit with friends or family and listen to some tunes. It will make me feel at ease inside by releasing any tension I may have in my soul. And then I feel like a whole new person! It brings fresh and positive energy to me. It's a remedy for tiredness and forgetting about my personal problems. This is another reason why listening to music is a great hobby.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, i feel, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22631578947 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56624692278 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518421052632 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9341479928 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.24 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0333354863921 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0118616820639 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219606076606 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0333354863921 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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