Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents, and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.
It is true that drivers are experiencing various accidents in the road although technology is being involved in transportation sectors. There are some causes of this trend, but steps could certainly be taken to tackle the problems.
Most people are less careful while they are driving in the road. It could be extremely dangerous not only for the drivers but also others to drive while tired or drunk. Another cause would be using mobile phones in the streets where people tend to use this device while driving no matter what. This means that it leads to large number of road accidents as they draw...
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not only for the drivers but also others
not only for the drivers but also for others
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