Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents, and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.
It is true that drivers are experiencing various accidents in the road although technology is being involved in transportation sectors. There are some causes of this trend, but steps could certainly be taken to tackle the problems.
Most people are less careful while they are driving in the road. It could be extremely dangerous not only for the drivers but also others to drive while tired or drunk. Another cause would be using mobile phones in the streets where people tend to use this device while driving no matter what. This means that it leads to large number of road accidents as they draw...
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth and resources among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizen themselves? 70
- the chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca Cola 87
- formal education methods, where the teachers instruct the whole class and the students work alone, more reliable and produce better results than informal methods. 70
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion? 60
- The only effective way to deal with unemployment is to introduce rapid urbanization 75
not only for the drivers but also others
not only for the drivers but also for others
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 290 350
No. of Characters: 1439 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.127 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.962 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.747 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.902 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5