It is true that road accidents are increasing dramatically even after the developments in the automobile sector. While there are various reasons for this alarming trend, I believe that governments can take steps to lessen this potential problem.
There are several reasons of rising road accidents in all over the world. One of the main reasons of vehicle crashes is that the new drivers are inexperienced, uneducated, lacking driving skills and capabilities. For instance, Williams reported that in 1995 in the USA, 16 years old drivers were involved in 35 crashes per million miles of travel, compared to drivers in the 20s and 40s who were connected to nine and four crashes, respectively, per million miles. Additionally, while most car accidents seem to be caused by usual factors such as alcohol and drugs, speeding, fatigue, and an inattentiveness, a fair number of accidents are caused by poor road design. A good example of this situation is Boston, where car accidents occur occasionally due to the poorly placed sign or inadequately maintained roadway, among other roadway flaws. Furthermore, the growing number of cars on the road is an another cause of frequent road accidents in the developing countries. It's happening because people tend to drive their own cars rather than using public transportation such as buses, trains and trams.
There are plausible approaches that governments could take to mitigate the problems described above. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people properly before they start to drive, and this could be done in schools or even as part of difficult driving test. Secondly, more attention could be paid to safe road design. For example, signs can be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving quickly. Finally, governments and local councils could curb road accidents by investing in better public transport, which would mean that fewer people need to travel by car.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are many reasons for road accidents, and a range of measures need to be taken to solve these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21142857143 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91744366715 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5528402697 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.285714286 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166582184356 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612917699494 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056869556468 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114324750835 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667724798097 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.