Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world.
What problems are associated with this?
What solutions can you suggest?
It is undeniable that these days although having a plethora of sports facilities, but an idle way of life is being popular in the modern world. As a result, the chances to affect certain disorders are irrefutable. This essay will examine the consequences associated with this condition and suggest some possible solutions to tackle it.
On the one hand, undoubtedly, there are several issues regarding settled lifestyle. The major problems are obesity and mental disorders. Firstly, a growing number of researches show that long periods of physical inactivity lead to becoming overweight. That is to say since people always stay at home as well as eat food doing nothing, thus they burn fewer calories compared to the amount of food they consume. Secondly, a lot of studies proved that without engaging in any outdoor activities or not socializing for a long time will reduce our brain's capacity to work actively, instead, this will damage our blood cells and neurons. Due to this, people gradually become stressed and depressed which will eventually result in mental disorders. Hence, they cannot be able to concentrate on anything and it creates an imbalance in their life.
On the other hand, a set of solutions presenting below could be helpful to alleviate the problems regarding sedentary lifestyle to a great extent. First and foremost, the best measure is to promote an active way of life. This can be encouraged by the influence of walking and cycling as this brings benefits that are effective to stay healthy and fit, also disease-free. Millions of people use their private cars for commuting, even for shorter distances rather than approaching these methods Furthermore, another reason for the increasing inactive lifestyle because nowadays people prefer to take rests often to workout in a gym. Therefore, the best way to avoid the hazards of an unhealthy lifestyle is to obtain a regular dose of physical activity.
In conclusion, leading a sedentary lifestyle causes a lot of health problems, including obesity and mental illness. The most effective solution is to encourage exercises such as walking, cycling and by promoting gyms and fitness centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20227920228 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77611024533 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623931623932 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7669892473 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.411764706 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2352941176 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168097422267 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460242251546 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489429805141 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103329211348 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043469575422 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.