Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?
It is a recent issue that the availability of sport facilities brings less influence on modern people living in unproductive habit these days. There are several problems and solutions from this tropical issue, which I will elucidate more below.
Regarding the problems, the tendecy of idle lifestyle has been more common in the vast majority of people leading to complicated illnesses. Seemingly, modern society lose their interest in maintaining physical endurance, thus, this inflicts them to suffocate from trivial diseases to fatal ones during the productive age. Moreover, cutting-edge generation most likely faces metabolic syndrome derived from consuming fast food as their dietary habit. It is true that, more and more unhealthy children diagnosed with diabetes phase 1 due to lack of encouragement of doing outdoor activities and preserving fitter body. Consequently, if this continuously happens, the premature death will rise its percentage, even worse the crisis of young population.
Turning the solutions, being fully aware of staying healthy life is individual's choice since a person may be the best doctor of himself. It has been reported that during an ongoing COVID-19 pandemic, the proportion of recent population choosing to maintain their physical fitness and strong immune system gradually increases. In addition, imposing regulation related to overweight issues prompts immense power, in which this obligates people to take more nutrious meals than the deleterious ones. Take Qatar government’s efficacy as an example, this nation provides rewards for its citizens which successfully control the ideal body mass.
In conclusion, In conclusion, the problems of adopting a sedentary lifestyle arise the progressive diseases on society and the poor digestion on children. Meanwhile, the solutions of this are individual awareness and overweight-related policy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75714285714 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99948975253 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692857142857 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9625700794 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923601925359 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333906247832 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345953869836 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655169921612 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038257090489 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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