Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is becoming more common in the contemporary
world.
What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?
Eventhough there are a lot of gyms , people nowadays tend to make a sedentary life.This essay will first point out the problems whcih are associated to this phenomenon,followed by a discussion about the most possible solutions.
Having a sedentary life, may become a threat to your life since it brings a various of drowbacks. First of all, sitting all the day at the sofa or on your office chair , can cause health issues such as lower back pain , which is the most common one. Moreover, it seriously affects the mood which leads to social problems. Being sorrounded by 4 walls and living only in the virtual world differs you from the society that much that sometimes you are not able to communicate properly to others or even to take part into discussions.For instance , I got a friend of mine who is really succesful in his career ,but he is suffering the issues mentioned above since he is all focused in his job.
There are a various ways to cheer up your routine. Practicing yoga will definetly help you to get into the flow. It is suggested by the scientist that a 5 minutes of yoga and streching every morning will make you see things in different and prospective ways.Furthermore it will not just relax your brain , but also your body, since the streching is really useful to issues such as back pain.As for more advanced ways of leveling up your mindset , based on my experience I would strongly suggest going to the gym or at least , choose a program that fits you in home conditions.
To conclude, eventhough there are a lot of issues related to sedentary life , there are also a numerous solutions provided to us. It is all a matter of mindset on how badly you want to make a change in your life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, as for, at least, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71241830065 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73416128948 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584967320261 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.975370871 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.2 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142117315542 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483100553909 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332879093363 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845804682738 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181525729232 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.