In these days people don’t want to exercise although there are a lot of sport halls around them in today`s world. This essay will discuss the problems which is associated with this problem and gives viable solution.
To start with, majority of people especially, in urban areas are being more impatient and weak in spide of having many sport accesses in our rapidly changing world. Because they ignore active actions or doing exercises after using the technologies which don’t require any movement. So drawbacks of these modern technologies can be the main factor of being immovable of people. As a result of this people may lose their physical abilities and get illness quickly. For instance, many programmers sometimes spend their day on using electronic device, because this is their job requirement and on account of this they are losing their visibility.
What is the more, sedentary lifestyle may lead people to obesity. On account of not doing exercises and unhealthy life, number of obese people is rising very fast and being crucial problem. With the result of this problem, they lose their normal physical activities and face to the problems of sickness. Take an example, in recent years amount of obese people increase twice than in three year.
To my mind, as the best solution of this problem, it can be suggested to walk and do exercises temporarily. In other words, people should not miss their exercise time and use bicycle instead of driving cars. Despite of taking much time, this way is safer and easer to feel that you are near to the nature.
In addition to this, it should be regulated the time and the food that people eat to decrease obesity. It is confirmed that is one of the effective ways of being and living healthy. For example, majority of actors, singers uses this way to keep fit.
To conclude, sedentary lifestyle may lead people to crucial issues of unhealthy life including obesity and being impatient. The most effective solution may be implemented by walking and doing exercises.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not doing exercises and unhealthy life, number of obese people is rising very fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53598723214 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557184750733 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7009608263 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7368421053 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198655755012 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629618373945 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618179277085 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104846275227 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049782331515 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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