Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.
What do you think are the main causes of this problem?
What solutions can you suggest?
Today, life has never been as comfortable and convenient compared to the previous periods. Although numerous fitness centers and sport facilities have been built to encourage people to get fit and live healthily, the result is proven to be otherwise. This essay will point out what causes this phenomenon and offer different methods to tackle it.
Health centers and gyms appear everywhere, some even advertise their venues on television and social media, yet there are still a large proportion of people having health problems. It is likely because of the distraction technology, especially gadgets such as tablets, mobile phones. People would rather spend hours on the Internet or playing video games than walking to a local fitness center. The Internet is so addictive that it is impossible for some to not check their e-mails or notifications in a span of minutes, let alone exercising. Furthermore, the cost of membership of a gym can be over people's budget. Most of the fitness centers are equipped with state-of-the-art training equipment and decorating interior, the fee of joining one is expected to be exorbitant. Instead of spending a large amount of money on a membership, people would rather use them for other useful purposes.
Without exercising, the public's health issues can deteriorate quickly and become epidemics; however, there are several solutions that can encourage the people to be more active in putting off weight. While the Internet is a major distraction, it can also be used to make people more fit. If they do not want to hit the gym, then they can exercise at home, throughout online fitness courses. For instance, on YouTube alone, there are dozens of videos instructing people to exercise properly. As for the sport facilities, by adding a variety of special events for members and offering discounts to newcomers, they can attract a handful of potential customers.
In the end, fitness has always been a major concern of a majority of people for decades, yet they are reluctant to go to a sport facility. But there are few simple methods to keep the general public healthy as well as the gyms fully occupied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...l purposes. Without exercising, the publics health issues can deteriorate quickly a...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...here are few simple methods to keep the general public healthy as well as the gyms fully occup...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, well, while, as for, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06478873239 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78560644265 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602816901408 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0138381708 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.764705882 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177943491264 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520343580101 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420434014233 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105047534752 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451213521391 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.