In this contemporary society, it is believed that the proportion of longevity is gradually raising. As far at I am concerned, this phenomenon can result in various problems for citizens and community, which can be tackled using appropriate measures.
First and foremost, it is possibly said that this issue can cause some main factors. To begin with, this will place a heavy burden on healthcare system if the number of old patients keeps going up since they are susceptible to illness. More specifically, special treatment to deal with chronic diseases including diabetes or inflammation all requires a great deal of investment from the government budget. Additionally, another problem results from this issue is the increase in competition of jobs, especially if official retiring age lengthened. As a result, old competitors will compete with younger competitors for just on job. Moreover, the rise in labor supply can lead to the growth on the proportion of unemployment.
In truth, some measures should be taken to solve these issues. Initially, elderly people can get engaged In many community services and charitable projects in order to make a positive contribution to the society. Since elderly people are not fully employed, they can dedicate for many government and community after retirement. For instance, they can be involved in unpaid jobs so as to provide accommodation and food for the underprivileged. On top of that, another way to deal with aging population in a country is to welcome immigrants, which can increase the number of adult in working age, especially the highly skilled. By offering advantages including attractive salary package, better living conditions or accommodation, countries will appeal working youngsters and develop their economies as well.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that there are indeed various repercussions regarding aging population upon individuals and society, yet they can be solved once according measures enlisted imperatively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun government seems to be countable; consider using: 'many governments'.
Suggestion: many governments
...t fully employed, they can dedicate for many government and community after retirement. For ins...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ce, they can be involved in unpaid jobs so as to provide accommodation and food for the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54019292605 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14277060276 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633440514469 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.824593106 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.866666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216216511227 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683903978299 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492268045492 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12719283704 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179542040022 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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