in developing country oral children have less access to education. Some people say that the problem can be solved by providing schools and teachers other say that computer and Internet should be provided discuss both the side and give your opinion
In this present era, the majority of schools and universities are built in the city. pupils from the countryside have less access to education in developing countries. While few people believe that that issue can be solved by providing schools and teachers, the rest of people do not accept that idea, they feel computer and Internet is the best option for that problem. This essay will explain both phenomena and also give my opinion, which described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there is plenty of evidence which indicated that school and teachers are reasonable for those issues. First and foremost, if the government build schools in rural areas, then that creates an atmosphere of learning, which will help students to focus accurately in the study. Furthermore, students can learn properly with teachers, and teacher have the ability to enhance students’ skills in every field. For example, the most successful businessman in Ratan Tata, reach this position because of his teacher.
On the other hand, there are numbers of things, which say computer and Internet provide education. Firstly the Internet use every information of all fields, therefore it helps students to get reasonable knowledge of his interested fields. secondly, there are various websites such as bayju, that provide certified courses, which do not require going to the school campus. For instance, 90% of students learn from the Internet and website during the pandemic time.
To conclude, although the Internet and computer provide education, Schools and teacher teach more accurately than technology. in my words, the traditional method is the best for rural children to learn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34586466165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6280212256 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1649659441 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284027588897 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869984417325 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778065460614 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163355629771 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830265212464 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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