With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends.
To what extent do you agree?
It is thought by some that people will always have opportunity to find new friends and will never become alone as the internet communication is developed. In my opinion, using the internet for communication can help people to expand their network while face to face communication and real friends should not be neglected.
Using the internet communication gives to people an opportunity to find new friends from distant countries, with different backgrounds and with mutual interests. There are many sources in the web, which connect people from different parts of the world, and people use them every day. For instance, nowadays people widely use the Facebook and make new friends from different countries or join various communities. As a result, people from different parts of the world share their ideas, cognize unknown cultures and hobbies.
Another point to consider is that using only online communication might have adverse consequences, for example, people might lose their connection with people from real world. In other words, rather than choosing to have real relationships, some young people would opt to have just online friends, as a result they will not be able to have a healthy relationship. Furthermore, it is commonly believed that having face to face communication is vital in order to succeed in life, as adults, they should have families and close people.
Finally, the best solution would be to combine online communication with real relationships. Using the internet communication in order to explore new countries, cultures and meet new people while having face to face communication will help to have friends and families.
In conclusion, face to face communication is vital for creating families that gives us feelings that we are not alone, despite, online communication is widening our network and helps us have friend from other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'friended'.
Suggestion: friended
... widening our network and helps us have friend from other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30536912752 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91546629139 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48322147651 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3587082605 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196383314038 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908356441204 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684683537226 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122537469999 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615917900676 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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