While some people state that an austere life will enhance the condition of the environment, others claim that scientific and technological developments can alleviate the environmental issues. This essay agrees that the advancements in science and technology can tackle the environmental problems.
On the one hand, it is believed that a simple lifestyle with the less use of sophisticated technology could reduce negative effects of the environmental issues. To begin with, decreasing the use of high-tech equipment, which consumes electricity, could develop a friendly lifestyle. For example, the emissions, which mostly stem from advanced technology such as electronic devices, could be controlled if people limit the use of electricity-consuming devices. Furthermore, simplifying people's lives could diminish the productions. To be more specific, waste from products would be reduced when people minimize their life by purchasing less products. According to a recent study, Tuvalu is one the most cleanest countries, since having an uncomplicated life by reducing the consumption of waste to almost 0%. It seems to many people that having a simple life could strengthen the environmental conditions.
On the other hand, I side with those who state that the advent of science and technology play a crucial role in environmental protection. Firstly, technology can be used to generate the renewable energy. For instance, wind, solar energy and wave power can be developed to curb the consumption of non-renewable resources by the advancements in technology. As a result, it is not necessary to rely on non-renewable materials, and people can generate electricity without damaging to the environment. Secondly, thanks to the improvements in science and technology, people are able to invent biodegradable materials. Biodegradable products take a few months to decompose fully without being harmful to the environment. To illustrate, many environmental organizations have invented biodegraded products such as straw, cutlery and gloves, which reduces the problem of waste disposal. As a consequence, biodegradable materials will not contribute to the environment issues.
In conclusion, while it is true that technology has impacted significantly on the environment. However, I believe that technological advancements can alleviate the environmental problems. Moreover, the enhancements in science and technology will not only create renewable energy but also reduce waste without influencing negatively the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...ronmental problems. On the one hand, it it believed that a simple lifestyle with t...
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Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun products is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...eople minimize their life by purchasing less products. According to a recent study, ...
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Line 3, column 698, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'cleanest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: cleanest
...ng to a recent study, Tuvalu is one the most cleanest countries, since having an uncomplicate...
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Line 3, column 698, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the cleanest'.
Suggestion: most the cleanest
...ng to a recent study, Tuvalu is one the most cleanest countries, since having an uncomplicate...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...nsumption of non-renewable resources by the the advancements in technology. As a result...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...nsumption of non-renewable resources by the the advancements in technology. As a result...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84594594595 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49135319249 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52972972973 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4464032026 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.15 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363707091744 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117038895982 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796694216616 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265393844527 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920968365022 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.